just to show what a great guy I am (or maybe just because grammatical errors in professional websites bug the shiiiiit out of me), I took the liberty of editing your introduction section from your website.
I'm no expert, but I did my best.
PARAGRAPH ONE:
numbers are always lowercase. years shouldn't be capitalized. "has" is unnecessary in the first sentence. you say "Nali's" which is incorrect in two ways - one, you later refer to them as "Nali" which is conflicting how you reference them before. two, you don't need an apostrophe to make something plural. "now" is unnecessary. you say "stronger and more fierce". in a list, everything has to be consistent. it should be "stronger and fiercer". I dunno if you're british, but if not..."realize". ellipses have three dots. "up" is unnecessary. you said "power behind Nali powers"...which is redundant. say "secret" or something. and the biggest problem you have throughout, is your tense consistency. you can't say "would" and "will" together if you're talking about the same time frame. so the last sentence should read: "If the Skaarj reach Vandora's Tear, it will lead to their defeat, and the Nali race will fall into oblivion."
PARAGRAPH TWO:
again, tense consistency problems. and in the second sentence I was a bit confused...fleets don't have names like that. did you mean a ship? unnecessary comma in the last sentence...
PARAGRAPH THREE:
you can shorten up "coming to" by just saying "approaching". the second sentence was kind of weird...of course they aren't tourists. nightmares getting stronger kind of baffles me, should say "worse". think "to" yourself, not "by". "have" is unnecessary. aaaand the phrase is "even the odds".
and in the last part, queen shouldn't be capitalized. and, not really a grammatical problem, but...not all queens have kings. bees? lol.
if I had written it (in an attempt to be grammatically correct), it would go something like this:
Two years have passed since the human escaped. The Nali are starting to get their normal lives back, but the Skaarj have come back, stronger and fiercer than ever before. Some Nali now realize that this won't end with them being slaves again...it will lead to their death. They've formed up a group of warriors, trained to defend the ancient temple that holds the secret behind the Nali powers. If the Skaarj reach Vandora's Tear, it will lead to their defeat, and the Nali race will fall into oblivion.
At the same time, the humans picked up the trail of the Vortex Riker's emergency beacon. A small ship called "The Galaxis" received orders to find out where the emergency call was coming from. They tracked it down, and finally arrived at Na Pali, an unknown planet. The beacon came from a small escape pod circling in orbit. What they did not know is that there is more going on at Na Pali than they could ever imagine...
As you drift into space, you notice a large ship approaching the planet. You notice it is a Skaarj vessel, and you know they aren't tourists. The nightmares just keep getting worse. You think to yourself: "The Nali helped me escape, now it's time to even the odds."
Every queen needs a king, and this king is out for revenge...
AND THAT'S MY GOOD DEED FOR THE DAY!
PS: sorry, I'm bored out of my mind. no offense is meant by this post
i have waiting for an rpg-like style like this 
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is it not an better idea to spend points by pressing a butten + 1,2,3,4 or 5? (like shift and 1)?
for the idea of making a FAQ section on my site, it just came to my mind 
